As the soldiers fought, explosions and gunfires surrounded them
New fighters getting trained to fight in these unprecedented times.
Zoom, zoom, helicopters arriving with doctors to help the injured
Australia and New Zealand fought and fought
Congratulations were sent from all over New Zealand.
By Mahika
Mahika, I think you did well describing some ideas about Anzac Day. Next time, try using some poetic language like similes, metaphors, alliteration or rhyme.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you used interesting vocab. Maybe you could try to use some language features. Keep it up!!
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