It was a gorgeous day . The clouds were as white as toothpaste. It was a tropical paradise. There was a gentle sea breeze, slightly cooling the air, providing some mercy from the hot, glaring sun beaming down .
The cold ,concrete walls were white and hard . The texture of some of the houses looked mildly bumpy while others looked smooth. The houses had bright, radiant blue rooftops and the windows were detailed. The houses were as pretty as a castle but even better. Most houses looked well maintained. Some houses were bright and some were dull . Over one of the balconies were denim blue jeans that had been left to dry in the blazing sun. . Plants grew in pot plants outside a few of the houses and looked to be flourishing. The houses were located in Santorini in the greek islands .Down below the dwellings was an exquisite ocean. It was a dark, navy blue colour but the further you looked out the lighter it would get. Spaced around the island of Santorini, were large and small rocks and mountains that were as large as monsters rising from the sea and they were furthest away . There were boats ,canoes and other cruising vessels in this inviting warm sea
Overall the feeling of this wonderful it is hot and tropical.It makes a good vacation spot. It is very beautiful.
By Mahika
well done Mahika. I like how you described everything well. next time edit and read through it a bit.
ReplyDeletei like how you described the place next time use more simles and things
ReplyDeleteAstonishing work Mahika. I really like all the describing words you used to describe this memorising place. I don't really think that there is anything you need to work on.
ReplyDeleteWell done Mahika. Your story is very interesting but next time paragraph your story or description a bit more.
ReplyDeletePeace Yo
Akshara