Tuesday, February 19, 2019

The task-To write a setting description about a place we went to in the holidays

Whanganui Landmark


Across from the harsh, clumpy grass was a tremendously big lake.  A towering landmark, pencils, made of metal and solidified wood stood tall and proud on a patch of the grass.  How did they build these gigantic structures and why were they here? Lots of cars whooshed by. Across the street dogs were getting groomed and washed.  Different aromas such as: petrol, ice-cream, fast food and big gigantic flowers could be smelt nearby. Waves crashed against the shore, birds sang sweet songs and kids shouted and screamed on the playground.  The sound of the wind could barely be heard as it was drowned out by the noise of the boisterous children. The bothersome noise of cicadas was continuous. The trees were rustling and leaves occasionally floated to the ground.  What a lively place.

2 comments:

  1. Good work Mahika, very well explained your experience at Whanganui.
    Especially I liked your curious questions.
    Keep up the good work!!!

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  2. Great Job Mahika!!! I really like how you described what you could hear,smell and touch. Next time maybe use paragraphing for each idea or sense.

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