“Mom! Henry’s cheating!” squawked Emma.
“Girls, can’t you just get along with the boys” mom yelled from the kitchen.
“Okay,” Mariam said wearily.
This was a traditional weekday at the Smith house, Mum would yell at the kids to play together they would fight and go play by themselves. The siblings are Mary who is oldest, then it's Henry the second oldest, and next is Liam he is the second youngest and lastly Emma, the youngest of the bunch. This family is not an ordinary family, this family is separated. For example, the sisters are best friends and the brothers are ‘dudes’. This family will only talk together either at the dinner table or when they are talking about a topic that’s interesting. Now getting all that out of the way this story is about when the two sisters sent the two brothers to Malibu for a Chanel Purse!! Let’s get straight into it!
This story starts when the kids were playing Candyland. That’s when the plan began.” Ugh, I hate losing, screeched Emma I’m going to go play in my room with Mary. Bye Losers!”
That was the last time the siblings ever talked to each other for the rest of the day. When the relative’s had got back to mingling with their ‘BEST FRIENDS’. That’s exactly when the plan started brewing up in the sister’s room.”Let’s send Henry and Liam to a different country or state!” whispered Emma.
“Great idea,” muttered Mary” We should send them to MALIBU which is in California because my friend lives and she has a Chanel purse that we can trade for our gruesome brothers!”
“That’s amazing” responded Emma.
To be continued…
well done mahika: I really like how you described how the characters feel and what they were doing. next time try to add similes and metaphors.
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